Nowadays, people prefer to live in cities because they can access all amneties in walkable distance. As a result of industrialisation and globalisation we are forced to live in metropolitan cities, subjected to availability of job opportunities. There is a lot of agonies related to city life, hence people belives that government should provide alternate accommodation facilities in local townships. Here we can see some difficulties and how to sort out these difficulties.
First of all, city population is crowded in terms of lack of free land, that allows proper housing development. Mostly people are accommodated in big flats, which cause plethora of problems, like sanitation, safe water, waste disposal and so on. Another important issue of concern is environmental pollution resulting from the faulty disposal of domestic and industrial wastes. People undergoes a series of epidemics like cholera, typhoid and other diseases due to the above mentioned reasons, besides rodents and mosquito makes a number of diseases.
On the other hand, city residents suffers much from traffic jam, smoke and dust due to vehicles and from other industries. Robbery and violence hit much in cities when compared to the countryside, as majority of rich are located in cities. People are compelled to eat and drink unhealthy food, because of lack of availability of safe organic foods. Lack of facilities for recreation and exercises are matter of discussion, sometimes.
If government can arrange adequate settlements in outer cities, it will be a good deal, which can reduce the current problems abruptly. It will push the strategies for solving issues related to accommodation, besides help people to live in a healthier environment. At the same time, good transportation facilities and provision of all kind of infrastructure development should be made.
In a nutshell, crowded city population can move to nearby township, subjected to proper arrangements by the government. People will be relieved much from the current situation if they are getting a better alternative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, so, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41486068111 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17734253176 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597523219814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8478452524 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191056464081 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535717319556 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042947009809 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998535548448 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044302064368 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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