In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development.
According to me,I think illegal employers are reject job applicantions because it is detrimental effect human being life. I am fully agree with this statement. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
In the sophisticated era, modern world of world all dwellers are very well education in the citizens.Hence, education play a vital role in their life because it all depart people life.Afterthat, todays person are co- education in their life and society give the respect and support all the work .For instance, today are very touch competition in the career like docter, teacher, police, fashion design, engineer and business etc. Therefore, dwellers are very obligation in their work . They are very punctual in their work places. But, they should give the best proformance in the office.In my view, employmee life is very hard because it they full time spend in their office rather than work and deal
in the international company and foreign company deal.
To trigger with, illegal employers are reject in the campany. Otherwise, all candidate are equal work in their company. Moreover, they should be perform best in their job.Last but not the least, illegal employers are not equal work later to all higher studies education employeers. But, they have a higher standard in the education level and they have very necessary to the work because company have contract to the foreign countries.For instance, Australia, Canada, New zealand and london so on.In my point of point, illegal employer have not well education in their life. They have detrimental effect to all the candidate.
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, in my opinion, illegal employers could be reject in the campany because today all dwellers have all education in the society. Then, why we should waste seat to give iilegl employers.They have well education and we during the job in any companieslike international and foriegn campanies.They should good message to the todders because they should focus in the study they will achieve any things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20771513353 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7688593414 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507418397626 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.496531934 48.9658058833 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873958921637 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046144950773 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647440320493 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602383713023 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547848806889 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.7 Out of 6.0
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