You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Iam Renuka, I would like to participate in "Enhancement of Tableau Reports" seminar which is scheduled for this December in Singapore. Iam keen in knowing more about the seminar Agenda.
Currently Iam residing in Malaysia and my company wanted me to attend the seminar since it will improvise my reporting ability. We do not have details other than the seminar planned month. Can you please advise on the following items for us to plan for the Seminar,
1. We just know the planned month, Please provide us with the exact date and duration of the course.
2. Secondly course agenda. What can we expect on the seminar day? This will help us in questionaire preparation.
3. Last and but not the least, Costing. Give us details on the cost of program and what are all included in the cost, such as accomodation, lfood, transportation. Please note that we are partners of Tableau and we have been recommended by the same to attend the course. Tableau did mentioned about the exclusive discount offer for the partners.
It will be great if you can reply us by October end.
Yours truly
Renuka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
... same to attend the course. Tableau did mentioned about the exclusive discount offer for ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.779032096 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0803828179 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184255706545 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056111212934 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582612733643 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853749649356 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615204150906 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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