Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans modern society, more and more people tend to explore new things, Actually, people's attitude towards this issue is varied from person to person. Although many would argue that the work five days a week for shorter hours is the most important factor in nation building, In my opinion, work only three days a week for long hours has a far greater impact and I believe that working three days offer more spare time even though the total working hours are the same.. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
In the first place, the hours that an individual may get home sooner in a 5-days working condition, are not of any particularly good use. To be more specific, in the evening or late afternoon most of the recreational resorts, shopping centers or other public places worth going to with your family, are either extremely crowded or closed. Moreover, due to the numerous activities that people are involved in their free time after work, it might be difficult to get together or truly feel relaxed. For instance, when I arrive home after a long day at university, I barely find anyone or anything worthwhile to spend time with. Basically, Everyone has something to do while I am too exhausted for even the most amusing things imaginable. During that period, My Brother goes to his basketball class, my mother is busy doing housework and friends are as tired as me. Consequently, I am confined to options like lying down on the sofa surfing the internet, playing video games or in the best case scenario watching a movie.
Secondly, working three days per week actually allows workers to rest well, four days are really a good choice to plan for relaxing and enjoying with his wife and children at home or traveling outside. A lot of employees couldn't to see their children and reassure of them due to the pressure of work. my own experience is a compelling example of this I remember when I was a child I couldn't see my father long time it has reached days was caused by his job, Furthermore, he quit from his work and searched for work part-time to spend much time with me. We can not value parents' love at a price. and also, most of our early beliefs stem from our parents. if we couldn't spend much time with our parents we couldn't do anything specifically, The first years of life.
As you can see, based on the argument above, I strongly believe that I hold the view that it is more enjoyable to able to be occupied with your job for just 3 days as opposed to the normal 5 days. Not only do longer holidays invigorate you, but also useless time wasted on unimportant matters would be utilized in a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59109311741 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47632332698 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7877479306 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309740939714 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783414471166 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873202354004 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188744349553 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569496863669 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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