A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?
Over the last few years, it seems that water shortage has become a serious issue which affecting the whole world. There are a variety of possible reasons for this problem, but measures could be definitely taken to tackle with it.
Water crisis in the world is getting worse as demand for water increases while the availability of resources is decreasing. One of the main reasons of this problem is that more people are using water more carelessly which means that they use excessive water for minor reasons. For instance, tap water is used to wash the car instead of using a single wet towel for cleaning. To tackle this issue, the government should not only increase water charge, especially for extra uses, while it should impose fines on water wastage such washing car at street. Another reason which may cause water shortage is that the population of the world has rapidly increased in the past 50 years. As a result, it increases water consumption. This problem is exaggerated in areas with a low natural water supply. The solution is for the government to invest more on filtered water to increase resources for domestic use.
Furthermore, pollution is a major contributor to water shortage in the world today. Water pollution is due to disposal harmful substances into clean water systems by individuals as well as industries which could lead to reduce the amount of water available for consumption. This problem could be addressed by designing efficient waste disposal system to prevent water pollution. Also, sea dumping should be strictly prohibited by authorities. The lack of water may be the consequence of agriculture. Researchers show that most of the water resources are consumed in the agriculture sector. One way to deal with this problem would be constructed efficient irrigation networks such as groundwater irrigation. Another way to prevent excessive use of water in agriculture is that crops are grown in fertile and rainy areas.
In conclusion, water lack is an urgent problem with many reasons contributing to it. Such as water wastage, increase population and human activities. To solve this problem, we should all cooperate with the government in minimizing our usage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11388888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76685491327 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2669617835 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297674930276 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105578069808 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440442436204 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197734762537 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263920352193 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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