Dear Gracy,
I am glad to receive your letter. Hope everything goes fine in your place. How is your work there? I am pleased to hear that you wish me to spend the holidays with you. I wish to be in the Netherlands and spend 2-3 weeks. It's been a long time we both met each other.
I would wish to come there by next month for vacation. As you know, I am held up with tiresome work pressure and getting leave is very difficult nowadays with a shortage of resource. After that, here schooling goes very critical for the child and getting left in the primary level itself seems difficult.
Shall I come on Mid April Next year? Summer would be the best time to view the natural beauty of nether lands. I would wish to travel to all locations with you and your family at peak summer time. It would be summer holidays for the child and I can apply for annual leave though!
Let me know if you agree with me. I am looking forward to enjoying the holidays with you. I would initiate to start Flight booking from now onward.
Best wishes
Trace
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Gracy, I am glad to receive your letter. Hope e...
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Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ations with you and your family at peak summer time. It would be summer holidays for the ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36040609137 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10476955607 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7585866606 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.6875 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232186344119 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772969136786 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649482190183 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144015936379 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438986780256 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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