Nowadays, circumstance of life is very important challenge for people in all societies. To evaluate the quality of life, there are several significant indicators such as economic, politic, safety and healthy indexes. Most successful countries devise suitable plans to improve all distinct criteria simultaneously.
Most social experts believe that quality of life has been increased in 21st century totally. They emphasize that because of continuous improvements in variety of fundamental requirements, people are more comfortable in comparison with previous centuries. As real evidence, recent published reports in U.S. illustrated that in 21st century, the number of death because of unforeseen disease, have been decreased more than 80% in comparison with the same time in previous century. Comprehensive researches show that in recent century, in more than two third of world countries, people`s income per capita have been increased sharply. Furthermore, these experts insist that without any exaggeration, technological improvements during this century have been facilitated people`s life. In their opinion, in contemporary century we can utilize Lots of innovative and appropriate inventions which have been created in previous centuries.
On the other hand, some psychologists claim that although in 21st century we had many technological developments, majority of people have mental issues unfortunately. They believe that this phenomenon has several considerable reasons. In their opinion, first reason is increasing distance between family members undoubtedly. They think that some other reasons such as lack of time, people`s more pay attention to social media and something like them are the most prominent reasons which caused to mental problems during these decades. As a consequence, these psychologists argue that modern life is not suitable for human during these years absolutely.
In conclusion, lots of developments in people`s essential life criteria is undeniable during recent years. I think creating many beneficial improvements in 21st century, made people`s life easier. I believe that to improve people`s lifestyle in future, they can`t neglect their mental problems and should balance all tendencies of life definitely.
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- Some people believe that parents should teach their children about money matters. What are the best ways to teach a child about money, in your opinion? Give some examples from your own experience. 73
- Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and culture events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...that to improve people's lifestyle in future, they can't neglect their mental p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, third, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98475609756 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21027030641 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5474525413 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.470588235 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157879177318 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543685496419 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393715848385 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893444580043 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471456714322 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.