A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the exploitation of animals has become a contagious issue. While an increasing number of people argue that animals should have identical rights as humans do, others assert that they are needed for medical research and consumption. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints, and explain its support for the former view.
It is considered by some that animals should be used in medical research and as a food resource. This is because these people feel that animals do not experience pain and can be used in medical or scientific experiments. In addition to this, they also believe that these creatures are a rich source of vitamins and minerals which they cannot receive from vegetables. For instance, animals, such as Chicken and Cow, are rich in proteins and vitamins which are hard to obtain from regular diet.
However, I would argue that most of the experiments done on these creatures are to develop new cosmetics rather than producing vaccinations, and recent studies have demonstrated they feel pain in the same way humans do. Thus, conducting experiments on them is preposterous. Moreover, a study from New York Times have concluded that one can get all the essential vitamins and minerals by incorporating different green leafy vegetables in one’s diet. Therefore, consumption of animals is not needed in order to maintain a healthy body.
To conclude, animals should be treated with respect and affection, in the same way people treat each other, as they exhibit same kind of emotions as humans do. In my opinion, Exploitation of animals must be stopped on immediate basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16030534351 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79272490489 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1639212856 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385308528782 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127089866647 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117829397631 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236161571731 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941285765218 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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