In many countries, the proportion of older people is increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?
Discuss and give your opinion
Due to advancement in medical science along with the improved and affordable healthcare facilities around the world, there has been a major reduction in the mortality rate. This phenomenon has led to an exponential increase in the number of elder people. Although it is a good trend, I believe this is only going to harm society in the future.
A large portion of government fund is reserved for paying the retirement benefits. As the population of the old people is increasing, the amount of money reserved is also increasing thereby putting a huge burden on countries financial system. In some countries, this is even responsible for their economic collapse. For instance, India has stopped paying benefits to its people so that they can use this money for infrastructure development.
In addition to it, increasing immortality rate has led to over population. Because of this, there is a huge strain on the resources of the countries. In some cases, to feed the population, countries have to resort to import foodgrains which results in widening of the balance of payment. For instance, Srilanka had to import rice to meet the requirements of its people.
Moreover, young people are struggling to get a job. The primary reason attributed to this is that older people are not quitting their jobs due to their improved health. As a result of this, the vacancy remains closed for the younger generation. This puts them in a state of depression and sometimes also pushes them toward criminal activity.
All in all, according to me, having older people around is definitely a fantastic thing but it has more dire consequences to the society.
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Suggestion:
...ctivity. All in all, according to me, having older people around is definitely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05839416058 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88069741616 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1864716482 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176447364232 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534829886509 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425032535192 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092023907482 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023893301905 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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