The bar chart show to the population in the U.K and the percentage of aged 60 and over in 1985 and makes a estimated for 2035.
The column chart illustrates the information about that the proportion of population of aged 60 and over lives in the British with compare in five different countries in 1985 and makes a anticipate for 2035.
A quick look on the graph is enough to make it clear that in the U.Kin five nations the number of population below 60 plus constantly increase in the upcoming year.
To commence with, in 1985 Wales had the highest where 16% of old 60 plus population lived and predicted that increase to more than quater and reached to the peak point by 2035. In next, the figure for aging 60 and over population in England and in the U.K had remained stable in 1985 which was accounted for 15%, with estimated that same in this both nations jumped up to 23%, respectively.
On the other hand, in 1985 in the country of Scottish and Northern Ireland depicts of age 60 plus population had the lowest as compared to three others above 15% while, it anticipate that in 2035 Scotland makes to the second largest country and reach to near by Wales nations than that the same ageing population in Northern Ireland slightly decrease as compared to Scotish only 2% fall, in 2035
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e different countries in 1985 and makes a anticipate for 2035. A quick look on t...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e different countries in 1985 and makes a anticipate for 2035. A quick look on the graph is...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kin
...s enough to make it clear that in the U.Kin five nations the number of population b...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...over population in England and in the U.K had remained stable in 1985 which was a...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anticipates'?
Suggestion: anticipates
...red to three others above 15% while, it anticipate that in 2035 Scotland makes to the seco...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...the second largest country and reach to near by Wales nations than that the same ageing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60576923077 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45808050383 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0357066966 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.6 112.824112599 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390222008115 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216736802932 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946187989296 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24064295312 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971698716096 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.