Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening. What are some simple actions that could help the environment.
It is universal truth that day by day environment become to more manipulate so, it is serious nuisance for everyone. Government and private firm more concerning about this problem as soon as tackle to this nuisance then they protect to the natural environment. I opine that modern technology more impact and responsible to worst nature.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning benefits if community more try to keep clean surrounding. These include enhanced people always feel happy and healthy. Firstly, some organization and individual involved forest department then to safe the trees, rivers and so on, with organise to lecture and seminar an invitation to send school then they encourage to students have their own parents with which they aware and encourage to protect the environment. Moreover, authority to get it public funds and using to establish the dustbin and hire to employer thereby, they personally go to every society and home that collect to garbage. Besides, government ought to makes a strictly rule and regulation that if any people break the law then they give to the fine with send to prisons.
On the other hand, government must be open to the recycling centre where they own home garbage to sell them and earn to little money's. Secondly, it is better way if people any occassuch as marriage function, birthday parties and so on give to gift only flowers and plants then might be they more attractive and encourage to keep the trees at home. Thus, they play the major role to protect the environment.
In conclusion, it can be seen that whereas the protection to environment has brought some advantages like green nature, fresh air and clean the water. I feel that neat and clean environment very crucial for community with which people also feel happy and strongly healthier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
... technology more impact and responsible to worst nature. On the one hand, there are num...
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Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: protecting
...nts with which they aware and encourage to protect the environment. Moreover, authority to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('strictly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rule') instead of another adjective.
...age. Besides, government ought to makes a strictly rule and regulation that if any people break...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...t be they more attractive and encourage to keep the trees at home. Thus, they play the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97689768977 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63164434549 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2462184874 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110609101384 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377964485462 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297139365637 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698798053322 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231152580815 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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