You work at home and have problem with a piece of equipment you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter: Describe the problem with the equipment, Explain how this problem is affecting your work,Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to a problem with my scanner machine. Several days ago, I noticed that my scanner machine began to work slower.
I have a specific function in my job which includes working with a person’s original documents such as passports, certificates and etc. Moreover, I have to have excellent skills and opportunity to scan these documents clearly and fast by using my scanner machine. Unfortunately, I cannot do this in an appropriate fast way
My work as a consultant offers people help with preparing documents for visas. Furthermore, I scan their original documents almost every day. Due to this problem my clients are forced to wait a long time while I scan papers. As a consequence, I service fewer people as usual.
As you can imagine, I am disappointed with this slow piece of equipment which you service for me every month. However, you can help me to work faster if you change the item into another one.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention. I expect you will exchange my scanner machine.
Yours faithfully,
Olga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...cuments such as passports, certificates and etc. Moreover, I have to have excellent skil...
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Line 6, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uence, I service fewer people as usual. As you can imagine, I am disappointed wi...
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Line 8, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f you change the item into another one. I hope this matter will receive your imm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92553191489 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86237435749 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4252275301 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290965161821 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959501514423 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063976496693 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145533502771 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438673636942 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.