Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Business are encouraged to move to rural advantages and disadvantages.
One of the most debatable issue today relates to that majority of individual's who live in cities and businesses are tend to move in the rural areas. Simataneously it is a favourable to the country side people's. Presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned views in following paragraphs.
One side of the argument that people who argue that the benefits of factories and industries relocate in rural areas considerably out weigh it's disadvantages the main reason for believing this is that in the modern age people who live in urban areas surrounded by the nomination of vehicles and it is a harsh reality of big cities environment is never capable for human being. So people are more likely to live in the rural areas. Moreover, the most evident would be that individuals who live in villager are go to the cities for work. When the factories move in rural areas it is positive features because industries provide the number of job to villagers. For instance, the recent survey findings and clear that 80 percent job are provided by the factories to the rural individuals.
On the other hand, it is possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that rural areas is polluted by the hot flue gases of the industries. Other stumbling block might be that transport system like truck are fully pivot on the factories they are used to transmit the load and final product of companies. Respectively, urban individuals deprived by their jobs and they tend to travel the long path in the purpose of jobs.
To conclusion, although there are good reason for housing and transport problem increasing. But in opinion strict rules should be make by government to use the solar power in factories and rules must be followed by the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...s who live in cities and businesses are tend to move in the rural areas. Simataneous...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...hicles and it is a harsh reality of big cities environment is never capable for human ...
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Line 2, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...at individuals who live in villager are go to the cities for work. When the factor...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'pivoted'.
Suggestion: pivoted
...t transport system like truck are fully pivot on the factories they are used to trans...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to transmitting'.
Suggestion: used to transmitting
...e fully pivot on the factories they are used to transmit the load and final product of companies...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
.... But in opinion strict rules should be make by government to use the solar power in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 302.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82450331126 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76177401832 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519867549669 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8887680553 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994544053125 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360166962162 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039735473689 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593954081119 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137954135423 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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