The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These two charts below illustrate road entrance to a hospital located in city in 2007 and 2010 and its transformation.
It is shown that Hospital Road was surrounded by six bus stop in 2007 but then they were all omitted and replaced by a huge Bus station situated in the left part of Hospital Rd remarkably in 2010. This significant station stop is accessible by two northern and southern round about which had been added during these 3 years.
Another significant transfiguration took placed in the right side of Hospital Rd. this mentioned part was used as Car Park Staff and public both together at first but after passing 3 years in 2010 they had been separated. Furthermore, Public Car Park had been relocated into the right sector of City Hospital building. Public car park is extremely more extended than past with its own direct entry from Ring road.
- IN THE LAST FEW DECADES THE NUMBER OF STAY-AT-HOME DADS HAS BEEN INCREASING NOTICEABLY.WHY IS IT HAPPENING?IS IT A MORE POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE PHENOMENON? 73
- the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 84
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
...Hospital Road was surrounded by six bus stop in 2007 but then they were all omitted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79865771812 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64866943096 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657718120805 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9523577914 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179525008276 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097253816681 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813636656256 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153845543635 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847074349479 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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