Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views on what should students to do in order to be successful in the workplace. In my view, I believe that working early after school helps them success.
There are concerns that people who receive good education in college or university are likely to success. There are all kind of learning resources like lectures and books and famous professors who can teach learners about some basic business knowledge and theories. Some courses even give them chance to stimulate an operation of a corporation by selling certain type of products. In this kind of experiment, they control the cost of producing and transporting and giving the price with the aim to increase the profit and rise the market shares. In addition, they do not have to take the responsibility if they fail to start a business.
Some people argue that it a better way to work directly after school. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. I agree with it because only people who really enter the work place are able to get practical experience and those who just know the theories and fail to put it into practice seem to be failures in business world. And students who want furthur education have the same purpose which is get a good job after graduating from university. Obviously society is a better and more realistic class for them.
In conclusion, applicants who get a job at an early time are likely to get a successful career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58067901886 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3771232269 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224601123016 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796083908589 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730839849844 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149680133455 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476158698209 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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