What will a typical day be like in 2050?
Our life is getting more and more modern with the development of science and technology. We are not surprised with smart technological equipment such as smart phone, laptop. In the future,however,there are many things that we never think about will take our living standards to a whole new level. In my writing, I will disclose to you three wonderful things in 2050.
First of all, we will live in a smart house. In 2050, the house is not only for living but also a helper. It can recognise whether it is the member of you family or not. Thieves can broke in your house. Therefore, you will feel more comfortable when you are not at home. In addition, you only say something and the house can do anything for you. For instance, when you say "I'm so thirsty", a cup of water will immediately appear in front of you. Moreover, you do not need to waste time and money to build a house. In the future, you probably order a your favorite house on the Internet and it will be delivered to your house in a short time.
Secondly, private transport that run on fuel will be old - fashioned. Unmanned vehicle will be your good friend every day. You do not need to drive it, you only tell your destiny and you will be there immediately. You do not worry because the number of accidents will be insignificantly. It can go anywhere that you like regardless of bad weather.
Thirdly, in 2050, Internet is not the only thing to search information. You will surprised with the appearance of Brain-net. Brain-net is a place where all thoughts will be shared and everyone can know what you are thinking. At that time, all nervousness and disagreements among people will be minimised because people can read your mind and understand your feeling.
There are three wonderful things that will appear in our life in 2050. I am looking forward to it. It is actually a break-through of science and technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...ch as smart phone, laptop. In the future,however,there are many things that we never thi...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r you. For instance, when you say 'Im so thirsty', a cup of water will i...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
...ouse. In the future, you probably order a your favorite house on the Internet and it w...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'surprise'
Suggestion: surprise
...y thing to search information. You will surprised with the appearance of Brain-net. Brain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 4.92783505155 446% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 937.175257732 167% => OK
No of words: 337.0 206.0 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65578635015 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80714979701 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507418397626 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 12.6804123711 197% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4516010462 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.76 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.48 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242301273909 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728006840169 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649712709712 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145077890485 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684572131021 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.