Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to extend prison sentences. Others, believe there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss your opinion and support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about either extending prison sentences will reduce crime rate or we have to look in better alternatives. While some progressively adore the ideology that there should be increase in prison sentence others undoubtedly dispise it. This essay will profoundly persuade that how alternative ways can reduce crime rates in societies.
Increasing prison sentence will not work as it will cause people to be isolated from society thus having negative impact on their social behavoir. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an educational research which showed that people who remained in prison for long time face 50% more social problems than one's which were prisoned for less time. So one can conclude that increasing prison sentence for a crime can not decrease crime rate.
On the other hand, some people argue that when people are educated morally in prison after they have committed crime, it causes positive impact on their social behavior. Results of a research conducted by a prestigious instituion shows that when in America prisoner were undergo moral education, 70 % of them not committed crimes after their release. So based on these results, prisoners should be mentally educated to overcome future crime rate.
Although there are compelling arguments on both sides of the case, after carefully analysing in my opinion, alternative ways to reduce crime must be adopted instead of extending prison sentences.
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- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to extend prison sentences. Others, believe there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss your opinion and support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience 77
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to extend prison sentences. Others, believe there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss your opinion and support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'increased'?
Suggestion: increased
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
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Suggestion: undergone
...hows that when in America prisoner were undergo moral education, 70 % of them not commi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... instead of extending prison sentences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2875 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63241956273 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5745543039 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233390499225 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103993256276 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591285630394 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161833960949 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532123665505 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.