You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Manoj,
I am writing to you with regards to Training Leave Application for one month starting from Jan 03rd, 2018 as I intend to enroll myself in "Coding - Logics and Application" course offered by XXX Institute
As you are aware that business analytics domain has become highly automated lately and to effectively perform this role, command over Coding has become extremely necessary.
The course will be conducted for four consecutive weeks. There will be five classes per week each of three-hour duration from 10:00 AM to 13:00 PM.
The course will help me to automate most of the data fetching and normalization functions that I have been performing manually so far thereby significantly reducing the turnaround time for daily, weekly and monthly reporting. Once completed, I will also impart the knowledge learned from this course to my colleagues.
Since I will have to daily travel from Toronto to Oakfield ( which is almost 150 KM drive back and forth) to attend classes, I won't be able to visit the office during this period
However, after class, I will remain available on my email or skype for any urgent matters.
I look forward to your support and approval of the application in this regard.
Yours sincerely,
Ubair Mushtaq
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to daily travel from Toronto to Oakfield which is almost 150 KM drive back and fo...
^^
Line 11, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to visit the office during this period However, after class, I will remain avai...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17788461538 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77350225101 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716346153846 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.126966989 44.8134815571 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.625 76.5299724578 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127656620147 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521347182299 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255022818335 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510146640639 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161504544945 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.