Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that the purpose of university education is to help graduates get better jobs but others think that university could bring more benefits for not only individuals but also society. personally, I agree with the view that university is the place which would include wider benefits than only for getting careers better.
First, it is obvious that individuals come to college that they want to achieve professional education for future. This is because comparing with the people who do not have complete learning journal, they could have lack of knowledge and lack of skills. these factors are extremely important for the one who have the plan for durable career pathway. Therefore, it is necessary for students to come into high rated company after they graduates from university.
however, it is also true when others claim that individuals and society could gain more advantages from university. For example, if students take high standard education of university, they would understand about social life. people could achieve and build up the public awareness such as help older people, maintain sustainable environment, respect each other in society. By these actions, the advantage of training from university would go far away than only stay inside the job taking benefit.
Overall, the major problem is the aim of university could affect to many aspects of personality, society, economy, politics which not only about getting better jobs. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the most obvious purpose that the one who have standard training program is the one who would have more job opportunities in the future. however, only by understand that university could bring more than workplaces, students would achieve higher values than they think.
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- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30689655172 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61378627967 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1080262538 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246429604255 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930346903111 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838624341044 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169119407168 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107764564217 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.