Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent year, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that governments should focus on protect human from illness and disease by reducing environmental pollution. Personally, I agree with the view that the polluted atmosphere in the earth is the main reason causes a variety of different kind of sick to people.
First, it is obvious that the fresh environment is the best ideal place for everyone to have the healthy life. This is becaused during the time that our environment now is extremely worse than before and too many people did not focus on how to maintain sustainability which causes greenhouse emissions and many consequenses which affects to environment dramatically. Therefore, it is necessary for governments to concern about providing solution to reduce the contamination in the earth for preventing illness from human
Moreover, focusing on developing an eco-friendly life for each individual can benefit for the economic issue of society. For example, if we can reduce the amount of vehicle smoke by changing to go by public transport that means we could lower the percentage of people who could get lung disease. Then, these individuals would not need to spend a huge bill for hospital and doctor. By that solution, society can save a lot of money and human would live longer and healthier.
Overall, the major problems is the clean earth could bring many benefits not only for human's health but also for economy and maintain the sustainable environment for the next generation, we should understand that protect environment is not only government issue but it is also everyone role to keep the eyes on their health and they should build up the public awareness together. By that solution which could help people take care of themselves better.
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- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10204081633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81277504555 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3853802238 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179629630675 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684735285931 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654355605054 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117095000174 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585995725029 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.