Life in the 21st century is better compared to the previous century. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the beginning of the 21st century the world has been changing rapidly, extensively affecting such aspects of our lives, as education, healthcare, culture and leisure. In my opinion, despite some drawbacks of the current century, there are more positive sides, including development of the science and an easier access to information.
On the one hand, there are some people, who consider the changes of the 21st century as negative, due to the effect of social networks and simplification of culture. The former is related to the tendency of spending more time in social media, including network websites, such as Facebook or LinkedIn and less time on life communication and interaction. Secondly, easy-to-digest art has been highly promoted during the past years, pushing back professional art performers. The newly discovered Internet stars from YouTube, Instagram and other Web platforms have come to replace some of the well-known musicians and artists.
On the other hand, many argue that the world has become a better place to live, compared to the 20th century, to whom I agree. First of all, the revolutionary development of high technology has led to life-changing inventions in healthcare. Many diseases that were extremely perilous and even fatal in the past can now be cured easily. Besides that, one of the distinctions of the new age is the availability and free access to almost unlimited information. Would a person want to learn about historical events, scientific phenomenas or the latest discoveries worldwide, he will only need an electronic device and access to the Internet. Such amounts of information would previously take us centuries to find, digest and implement.
To conclude, even though there are some demerits that are present in the 21st century, the benefits in terms of improved healthcare and free information do outweigh those and merit to be taken into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ther Web platforms have come to replace some of the well-known musicians and artists. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29508196721 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96592853273 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2428598669 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148299554726 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442165461884 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427456754486 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828005900126 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208286457948 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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