Currently, there is a significant increase in the number of people who migrate from countryside to city. However, the shortage of population in the rural areas has serious implications on the rural areas itself. In the following essay, my opinion about the statement and viable solutions to the problem would be elaborated.
One of the negative influences of decrease in people in rural areas is the enlargement of the disparities between the city and the countryside. Human resources play an essential role in terms of the development of either the city or countryside. In the event that the people are of insufficient number, it is virtually impossible to facilitate the development of the area. Take Taiwan for example, there is a tremendous gap between the metropolis and the countryside in terms of the living standard and the development of the industry.
In order to remedy the situation of rural depopulation, it is necessary for the government to conduct practical strategies. As the primary reason for people migrating to the city is that the inadequate employment opportunities, the authorities should facilitate the development of rural areas by utilizing its local industry. In that case, it could probably boost the economic development and therefore, create more opportunities for people who are unemployed.
Apart from creating more working opportunities, well-developed infrastructures are of vitally importance. The imperfect public transportation and the unsatisfactory healthcare are the resistance of people returning to countryside. A feasible solution to this problem can be done by expanding the transportation network and popularizing the medical resources and healthcare.
By way of conclusion, though the trend of people migrating from the countryside to the city is irreversible, there are effective and practical ways to mitigate the unpalatable circumstances, nonetheless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63321799308 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48044256411 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505190311419 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2946416229 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278672648995 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903406829002 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643604759922 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151708463124 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585875053451 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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