The given chart portrays the statistics of smoking habits on people in UK in age categories. On the whole, there is fluctuation in the proportion of smoking habits among population in Britain, irrespective of any age group.
Turning to detail, it is salient that predominant figure falls into the category of 16-24, standing at over 60%. In contrast, the habit of “ex-smoker” observes a lowest percentage, with merely 3% in the age group 65-74. In terms of the most significant gap, the age category 16-24 witnesses the biggest gap, with nearly 62% and roughly 4% in the habit of never smoke and heavy smoker, respectively. Moreover, we can see that the "light smoker" concentrate primarily in the 25-34 age brackets, standing at virtually 32%.
The most striking point is that the percentage of people who are ex-smoker is almost on par with that of people who never smoke in the category of 65-74, with nearly 45% of never smoke and 40% of ex-smoker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...habit of 'ex-smoker' observes a lowest percentage, with merely 3% in th...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... point is that the percentage of people who are ex-smoker is almost on par with that of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, in contrast, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01840490798 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07044029386 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0856702619 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116820571753 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654870092355 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353907941902 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890440512444 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527951965741 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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