Is it beneficial to have private companies in the industry of space travelling?
The reading passage and the lecture are both about the existence of private companies for the sake of space travels. The passage holds the view that these companies will benefit the space travel industry. The lecturer challenges this point. He thinks that private space travel companies will have bad effects on this industry instead.
First of all, the author of the reading believes that private companies can help reduce costs of space travel. Not only that, but they will cause the price of technology related to these travels go down as a result the expected competition between private companies. The lecturer casts doubt on this claim. He states that this is very promising claim. He mentions that industry of space travelling is very expensive to be cheap in the near future. He thinks that these companies will raise cost of safety checking of the increased numbers of space shuttles and the cost of collision avoidance system between these shuttles.
Secondly, the author contends that by having more scientists working in this industry, it is very safe to predict an increase in the number of discoveries in the space. The lecturer on the other hand, posits that rate of discoveries will decline because the high salaries of private companies will encourage professional scientists to abandon their research in the governmental companies.
Finally, the author assumes that government and people of the country will benefit from taxes that were invested regarding this industry. Being private, it is the owners’ responsibilities to raise fund for their own corporates. The lecturer argues this point. He points out that cost of infrastructure of such an industry is very huge that private companies can’t afford. So he predicts an increase in the taxes paid if private companies happened to be established.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will benefit the space travel industry. The lecturer challenges this point. He thin...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...oubt on this claim. He states that this is very promising claim. He mentions that industry of spa...
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Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pensive to be cheap in the near future. He thinks that these companies will raise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 295.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21016949153 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71600108225 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4001198281 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4117647059 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354491459435 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120899051429 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125507668892 0.0662205650399 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238516177018 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122224430674 0.0443174109184 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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