Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduate get better jobs.other believe that there are much wider benefits of university education for both individual and society .discuss both the views and give your opinion.
These days more ad more people are making the choice to go to university.While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects,other think that society and individual benefits in much broader ways.
it is certainly true that one of the main aim of university is to secure a better job .To begin with, the majority of people want to improve their future career prospects. attending university is one of the best way to do this as it increases our marketable skills and our attractiveness to potential employers.For example, in Europe, further education is very expansive for many people,so most would not consider it if it more secure future and a higher standard of living.Also, university have their reputation to consider. They definitely want to ensure that their students are going to get the best jobs as this will affect future funding and university application.
However, there are other benefits for individual and society. Firstly, the indepence of living away from home is a benefit, because it helps the students develop better social skills and improve as a person. many children,for instance, will have to leave their family live in halls of residence and meet new friends. As a result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives. Secondly, society will gain from the contribution that the graduate can make to the economy . we are living in a very competitive world so countries specialy developed nations need educated person in order to compete prosper .
To conclude, I believe that although a main aim of university education is to get the best jobs,there are clearly further benefits. if we continue to promote and encourage university attendence , it will lead to a better future for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93753962915 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.931201227 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291250684133 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999412616758 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753956554658 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187762039394 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667454852224 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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