In today's day and age it's very important to be confident. Yet some find it difficult to speak in public or present oneself to an audience. It could be termed to one's upbringing, in sense to their education, social status etc.
Like the saying goes, You can douse the fire only when you fight the fire. Some of us don't feel or aren't that confident while addressing a group or talking in public. It could be due to stage fright or simply low self esteem. Most of the educational institutes in the yester year's didn't give much emphasis on personality development rather just on importance of quality education. Even one's upbringing could be a major factor. From childhood or as you grow up if one is not exposed to an audience, wether formal or informal we would continue to lack in confidence. It happens due to different strata of communities we come from. One coming from a metropolitan would probably more vocal to express his or her view or an opinion, than someone coming from a small town. The exposure to meeting different people and interacting would be limited.
Thus even with todays digital world where we have everything on our finger tips, where we can communicate easily to anyone, whether we know the opposite person or no we still hestiate to communicate. This is only due to lack of opportunities or probably just because of someone's own personal nature. Unless we as an individual don't take it up peraonally to address our own aspect of speaking in public or an audience we will always have the stage fright.
- People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience 56
- Once children start to go to school, schools influence them on their intellectual and social development more than parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Write at least 250 words. 56
- You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letterexplain your situationdescribe your problemstell him/ her when you think you can start. 56
- Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punish 56
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69144981413 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.680104041 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5153102048 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177497327124 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569231093211 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10292714077 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132123866123 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806985787124 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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