Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people have a perspective that being rich has the opportunity to help others but some contest this claim. I strongly agree with this point that a wealthy person can support someone who is in need.
To begin with, there are many youngsters in India who is not able to educate due to lack of money and therefore, they have to indulge themselves in labor work for their survival. Affluent can provide free education to children who are not able to educate because of money. They can even sponsor the charity show by appointing any celebrity. There are many rich people who involved themselves in charity work to help poor. For instance, Nita Ambani who is famous for her charity works in India.
In addition to this, prosperous man can help charity school with study stuffs which basically help in educating children from the poor families. There is Being Human Foundation charity which is founded by Bollywood star Salman Khan that provides education and healthcare services for the underprivileged in India. Also the famous Indian businessman Mukesh Ambani launches Jio mobile network and phones at very cheap price, as a result almost everyone in India is now able to browse internet. So this campaign has proved successful to support digitalization in india.
To conclude, there are many youngsters who want to get educated or wait for an opportunity to do something innovative but lack of resources they have to step back. Affluent can help them with the resources and provide opportunities to talented people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...vices for the underprivileged in India. Also the famous Indian businessman Mukesh Am...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovide opportunities to talented people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99606299213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66109407253 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.903947647 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103848085348 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440480213814 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062212560967 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845431979922 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06253398285 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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