Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give detail of how you and your friends or family use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
Decribe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to the sports and leisure facility that is considered to close for the purpose of saving money.
My friends and I always come to this center twice per week to get relax after tired working hours. Every Friday night, we spend 2 hours to swim here because this has three big swimming pools and they are all clean. This place also has an inside badminton court where we play every Saturday morning.
After the facility was opened, public health has been improving significantly because people in this community love to spend their free time to do exercise here. Most of families in this area have low income; therefore, a free center where they can relax is extremely helpful.
If this center were closed, local people would have no place to do exercise and their health would be effected. Moreover, hundreds of people working in this facility who are also living in this community will lose their jobs leads to a very bad consequence on local people living standard.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Suri Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the families') or simply say ''Most families''.
Suggestion: Most of the families; Most families
...nd their free time to do exercise here. Most of families in this area have low income; therefore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38006933231 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6592970371 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12209607164 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598467902228 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708127498545 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089921736791 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866677120444 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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