you had a meeting of a company in a hotel where you were disappointed from their hall setup. write a letter to give suggesstion .
Dear Sir,
I am writing in refrence to a recent meeting i had with a company at your hotel and was disappointed with the hall set up and would like to offer some valuable suggestions.
first of all the technical set up was very poor, while delivering a presentation, people sitting in the back were not able to hear the presentor, this happened due to issues with the audio system. Secondly, there were frequent power cuts which happened multiple times during this presentation.
I would like to state that the meetings we host at your hotel are very critical for us, thus the issues highlighted above do not give a first great impressions to the companies we are dealing with, so in reference to the above I would like to give a few suggestions like the technical arrangements including audio-visual system should be checked properly before the presentation starts, the hotel should also provide a power back up system in case there are power cuts in the meeting hall.
Please consider the above suggestions as a valuable feedback for future improvements
Yours sincerely
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing in refrence to a recent mee...
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...writing in refrence to a recent meeting i had with a company at your hotel and wa...
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Suggestion: First
...to offer some valuable suggestions. first of all the technical set up was very po...
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...hotel are very critical for us, thus the issues highlighted above do not give a f...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impression'?
Suggestion: impression
...lighted above do not give a first great impressions to the companies we are dealing with, s...
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Suggestion:
...aluable feedback for future improvements Yours sincerely vinshu
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... future improvements Yours sincerely vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, thus, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96195652174 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81149556733 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.397190984 44.8134815571 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.6 76.5299724578 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.8 16.8248392259 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 4.34317383033 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14786238208 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712858581567 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683836506587 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855635729772 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745150010033 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 8.37731958763 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 70.7449484536 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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