People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams.
Being successful is always desirable to everyone and what exactly is the key to be successful? Being accepted a different work in a team may be a wise choice. Some people also states that people who insist their own opinion in a team are regarded as the base of succeed. As far as I am concerned, it is essential for people in a team to accept others’ different opinions.
First of all, accepting others’ criticism can avoid people’s mistakes in their work. A successful team always contain different opinions from their teammates and that is not because they are not united as one. One the other hand, that is because they want to avoid even little mistakes to their team. Thus everyone should listen to others different opinions carefully and then discuss together if it is true or not. Thus, accepting others’ criticism is to a person as the advice is to a leader.
Besides, being different opinions always is the key to be successful in work. May be like others in daily life will bring more friends but people who can insist differently are able to standout. For instance, taking Steven Jobs as an example, he invented a new type of mobile phone and changed people’s life style. It is said that most of their teammates disagree with him. Finally, they accepted his thought and lead a milestone in the industry. Therefore, work and daily life are so different and being differently is essential to succeed.
Thirdly, another factor should be taken into consideration is that always according to others opinions and orders will lost people’s ability of judgement. Successful people should have different strategies when facing different opinions and it is based on people’s decision. So it is obvious that people should have their own thought about other’s opinions even though a conflict and criticism.
From what have been discussed above, it is easy to conclude that it is true that people should think a lot about different opinions and criticism. That is because not only it helps people avoid their mistakes but also it is the key to be successful. In turn, it bring people with strong ability of judgement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...s the key to be successful in work. May be like others in daily life will bring mo...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ding to others opinions and orders will lost people's ability of judgement. Suc...
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...s the key to be successful. In turn, it bring people with strong ability of judgement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95867768595 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79771563492 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8693825538 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7142857143 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212960446528 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742048111902 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615404905443 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132382289089 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405055145117 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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