Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
The public holds different views about the spread of animal experimenting for the developments of new medicines and the safety level of other products. When it is argued that this trend should be banned because animal testing is morally wrong, I believe that a limited amount of animal experimentation is literally useful for the developments of medicines.
On the one hand, it is reasonable that animal testing is not humanitarian. Firstly, the human are not likely to have the right to put animal under the test thereby to find out the safety of products such as cosmetics. For instance, many cosmetics brands have recently released the beauty products that are not tested on the animals. Secondly, the lives of all creatures on earth should be respected. If the cosmetic industry can discover the way to produce the beauty goods without testing on animals, the scientists also can find out the alternative methods to develop new medicines.
On the other hand, I side with those, who believe that animal experiment is necessary to make the new medicine occur. Basically, nowadays testing on animals is the best way to measure the effectiveness of new medicines, For example, the suffering of mice of rats can help the scientists to find out a new kind of medicine saving the lives of million people. Furthermore, it seems to me that animal experimentation is a necessary evil when the humans are on the way of developing new drugs and medical procedures.
In conclusion, I believe that it may be impossible to ban the animal testing for medical purpose until humans can develop other methods which are equally effective.
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- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 56
- Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97794117647 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86168308934 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511029411765 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8490282737 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392908520121 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14972873013 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958045765779 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256419840641 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124547268888 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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