This flow char indicates the result of deforestation in terms of flooding, degrade of vegetation, less biodiversity.
For the first step and immediate effect, when heavy equipment is used to log the trees cause to compress the soil and soil become hard and baked under the equipment wheels. Therefore the rain water runs off and contribute to flooding.
Secondly, when the woods is ruined, the roots below the soil is vanished, so the stuff wich is held the top soil does not exist anymore. As a consequence top soil will be eroded and vegetation will be degraded.
Another result is, enhancing risk of burning deliberately or accidentally. Waste of burned woods will cover the ground and the micro-organisms that were using the decomposed leaves and woods will be lost. So soil will be less fertilized and effective in other word the vegetation will degrade and species move in.
And the final immediate consequence is a reduction in moisture that is emitted to the air by plants. Because there is less moisture in the air, there is less precipitation and increase drought proportion. By happening drought in order green place will reduce, so it lead to less biodiversity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect, when heavy equipment is used to log the trees cause to compress the soil and...
^^
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'compressing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: compressing
...uipment is used to log the trees cause to compress the soil and soil become hard and baked...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...d and baked under the equipment wheels. Therefore the rain water runs off and contribute ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...in order green place will reduce, so it lead to less biodiversity.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98984771574 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87053032431 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9878675272 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0234444269834 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108914215168 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179826526861 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0158143013707 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143772901021 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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