By and large, it is established beyond doubt teachers play a prominent rule in all societies. They are whom we spend most time of our childhood and teenager with. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea, teachers were more appreciate and valued by society in the past than nowadays, some people I’m sure agree with that, others disagree. In my view, teachers gain more value nowadays rather than past for two important reasons.
The main reason is, students show more respect to teachers. Since psychology has been developed, teachers know how to behavior and communicate with children and teenagers, they build good connection. For example, when I was in second grade, I usually forgot to do my homework. Although My teacher was confined with doing homework, but not only she does get angered with me but also she get my parents phone number and remained my parents that I have homework to do. When I told my father that I gave his number to her, he was just like me. When he forgot to do his homework, his teacher humiliate him and physically punished him. He also mention that accidently he saw his teacher in a candy shop and the teacher recognized him and when his teacher wanted to say hi ,my father ignore him and ran away. As you can see, if the teacher behave my father appropriately, he stop by and show his devotion and respect to him.
Another reason is that, teachers in developed countries have the highest salary. That is because teachers have a big rule in children talent flourishing which is the basic for a society to develop. For example, my cousin is a teacher in Germany. He states that when doctors protest to encourage government to rise their salary, the prime minister declared that how it is possible they earn more money than the teachers educated them? Another example I want to mention is that actually at a certain point in time I decided to become a teacher in Finland. And when I search about it, I understand that government give teachers a house and a car at their first job year. These facts illustrate me that teachers are living in a high and decent position in societies.
In sum, though some may opposed that teachers are appreciate and gain more value nowadays rather than past. Not only students does respect teachers, but also government provide easy life for them. any society that want to reach its zenith, should respect and value their teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...e does get angered with me but also she get my parents phone number and remained my...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...im and physically punished him. He also mention that accidently he saw his teacher in a...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cher recognized him and when his teacher wanted to say hi ,my father ignore him a...
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Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m and when his teacher wanted to say hi ,my father ignore him and ran away. As yo...
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Line 3, column 870, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
...cher behave my father appropriately, he stop by and show his devotion and respect to...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...ough some may opposed that teachers are appreciate and gain more value nowadays rather tha...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Any
... government provide easy life for them. any society that want to reach its zenith, ...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould respect and value their teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, for example, by and large, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52373561035 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529550827423 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8828164935 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0454545455 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224475043962 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678093957042 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565784234438 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153121751417 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631667520109 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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