There is a great debate about whether there will be fewer or more cars in use in the future than there are today.In my opinion there will be more cars in use than there are today.In this essay,I will address three potential reasons to support my argument regarding this subject.
First of all,cars already have become an important part in our life and they are becoming popular day by day.In this era of advanced technologies,there is a high chances of cars being relevant in our daily life.The cars which will be in use after twenty years will for sure have more features and will have advanced technologies,hence people will certainly buy them.For instance,one family decides to go to movies and if there is their own car then it will be very easy for them to reach on time with ease.However,if there wasn't car then they would have to take bus or public vehicle which is both time consuming and tiring.
Secondly,with the increased technologies,there is increased rate in crime and having a car is safe as it is private vehicle and has different options on the safety side like bullet proof car.Similarly,the children can go to the school on their own which ultimately decreases the cases of kidnapping,murder etc.Parents can feel carefree and stress free which also reduces health problems.
Lastly,with the use of advanced technologies,people have been able to discover cars that don't emit gases and run from electricity like Tesla today so we can think that with more technologies there sure will be high demand of cars in future as they even won't pollute the environment.
In conclusion,I believe that the demand and popularity of cars will go on increasing on the coming days because of there convenience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92068965517 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0970988688 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.045269787 48.9658058833 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.4 100.406767564 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.6045352989 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.4 5.45110844103 539% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268256683648 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149651660983 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095341619489 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149651660983 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095341619489 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 11.7677419355 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 58.1214874552 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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