Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by math18 on Sat, 12/08/2018 - 22:35

Nowadays, the car is one of the essential parts in human lives, and by inventing of advanced technology, our lives will be more comfortable and more dependent on cars. There is a controversial view about decease or increase the number of cars using by people in twenty years ahead from now. While, some people say that there will be a fewer car in use than there are today, others have a different opinion. I agree with the latter group and explain several reasons in the following paragraph.
There will be more demand for the car, by added new options and advanced technologies in a new car. Many people already have a car, but they want the better ones. By progress technology, car companies use it in a new model of car and tempt customers to buy it. Compare with twenty years ago, not only produce of car increased, but also, varieties, options, and technologies that use in cars, significantly improve. Car manufactories by advanced produce model will encourage people to buy a new car.
Controversy to the past, today car become a basic need. In several decades before cars were a luxurious device, but now, it seems, having a car is a necessary thing to have more than ever. In the metropolis, by the formation of a new style of life and existence different entertainment, people need to have a car for a normal life. For example, in the daily routine life of one family, parents need a car to go to the work, a child needs it to go to school; also, family needs a car to go shopping, etc.
Many people have not a car and attempt to buy one. If whole cars in the world consider, we observed, increase it in twenty years from now. There are many undeveloped countries that their people not wealthy enough to buy a car. These people try to buy a car in the future, and consequently, they increase the total number of cars in use in the world.
To sum up, it seems the number of cars in use will increase in the future, and finally, in twenty years there will be more cars in use than there are today.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, so, while, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45528455285 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56849100167 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449864498645 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8070125498 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293575493514 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114917417188 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852847369139 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216292656521 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110903335117 0.0645574589148 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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