If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
History has taught us a number of lessons which demonstrated the importance of a proper vision and mission in enlightenment of a human. All the historic figures had fought and struggled through their lives to achieve something beyond a mediocre human's imaginations. They chose different paths which were left untouched by others.This made them stand apart and above the crowd.
The statement given perceives above mentioned idea in a comfortable way that one can take any means to attain a worthy goal. Many historic figures have had worthy goals, but how many of them are remembered in a positive sense, how many of them will be shown as a role model in today's society. It doesn't matter to stand above the crowd or to shine in history, if the means to achieve those heights are filled with negativity.
Every goal set by a person is worthy as per his/her norms, but the question whether it is worthy enough to define and design ones character is answered by the path chosen to achieve it. Consider a well known comic character "Lex Luthor", he is a well settled american business tycoon. His one and only goal was to make this world a better place to live. Yet he is reputed as one the greatest villains in comic books, the only reason is that he chose to achieve this goal by eliminating all the persons who might have a higher ability than a normal person. which made him to stand as a criminal and villain who always fails at his job finally.
The above example shows us that one is never succesful in achieving the goal if one doesn't have perfect mission and path to achieve it. Luthor might have had a noble goal yet his actions deemed him unworthy to stand alongside heroes who are designated as role models. No result is pronounced to be fruitful and helpful for humanity if the path chosen to achieve it is not a polite and harmless one.
A worthy goal is not always enough to define a human being, rather the worthy path chosen to achieve the goal is what defines a noble human being. Feeding a hungry beast might be a noble cause but never at the cost of an innocent life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43984771306 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7321712168 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982582839291 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347436858806 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538271316688 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557400714373 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410008992042 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.