While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
The humanity had faced a large number of hurdles, yet passed them with all the efforts of societal links, and cooperation. The evolution of human race is inevitably linked with the cooperation among the individuals. This cooperation led us to reach the current day scenario where we lead a happy life. Every tribe has an internal cooperation which moved it to safe and comfort zones. But every tribe should led by a selected individual, and that individual stands as the leader of the tribe.
However, no leader could lead a group where there is no cooperation among its members. This issue is clearly addressed in the given statement. It states that the society needss to prepare its younger generations for leadership in various fields by instilling sense of cooperation in them instead of competition. This is a perfect fit, where a clear insight of taking the position of aleader further is sighted.
Adding to the statement, a leader might not be the one with best attributes amog all, but a leader is definitely the one who can make use of the best attributes from different individuals. So, a leader must possess a coherence with the group. A leader should definitely play a cooperative role to channel the required pieces of efforts at right place and right time. A leader is analogous to a heart in the human body. A heart pumps the blood in the body and its the most vital organ in the body, yet it doesn't compete with other organs, it rather gives the most amount of the blood to brain which requires a lton resources. Similarly, a leader should be cooperative in the field of work instsead of competitng with other individuals.
Moreover, instilling such cooperative sense in the younger generations is a moajor task ahead of the society. One needs to have the best seed to reap the best yield out. So, the future leaders need to be trained today with the insistance on importance of cooperation rather than competition. A delicious dish contains various herbs, spices and vegtables. But, the delicacy of the dish lies in all the ingridients together, it can't be attributed to a single ingridient. It is the cooperative taste which brings the delicacy to the dish but not the competion among the tastes. Similarly, success of society is brought out by the cooperation among the individuals and the way in which a leader uses this coopertaion. Thus, a leader needs to be instilled with a ense of cooperaation so that he/she makes a perfect use of it when required.
Finally, a leader is born out of the society thorugh numerous struggles and all these struggles teach a leader, how to be a leader. A society can be compared to web of interconnections and relations, a web can stand in a safe state as long as all the connecitons and relations are held together through cooperation. One can't decorate single piece of puzzle for the whole time and hope to solve the puzzle, instead a leader is the one needs to combine all the pieces together to solve the puzzle. Thus a leader needs to be instilled with sense of cooperation rather than a sense of competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the tribe. However, no leader could lead a group where there is no cooperati...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...analogous to a heart in the human body. A heart pumps the blood in the body and i...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...A heart pumps the blood in the body and its the most vital organ in the body, yet i...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...he most vital organ in the body, yet it doesnt compete with other organs, it rather gi...
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ies in all the ingridients together, it cant be attributed to a single ingridient. I...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ies in all the ingridients together, it cant be attributed to a single ingridient. I...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to teach'
Suggestion: to teach
...erous struggles and all these struggles teach a leader, how to be a leader. A society...
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Line 9, column 321, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... held together through cooperation. One cant decorate single piece of puzzle for the...
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Line 9, column 497, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...he pieces together to solve the puzzle. Thus a leader needs to be instilled with sen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76261682243 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81941783946 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461682242991 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.9 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9312913724 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3703703704 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8148148148 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190983053952 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527386243108 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648027320283 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114307431529 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529066622375 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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