While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
As per the statement, young people of particular nation can get the leadership quality in various fields by cooperation rather than by competition. At some extent, I agree with the statement considering world would be better off with democracy rather than dictatorship. Although, I would not completely ignore the competition parameter from the statement. Competition in various fields will be helpful in better leadership.
Considering the various problems of the world which we are facing, leadership with cooperation will play catalyst factor to tackle those problems. For example, the world is experiencing severe problems like global warming, dear-cutting rain forests, unemployment, hunger etc. Now, this problems can't be solved by one nation or one society. Everyone should take part and provide the support to handle these unforeseen situation rather than dealing by themselves. By cooperating with other nations' leader, new and innovative solutions can come up.
In similar way, if we take the field related to industry, decision is taken by the stalwarts of industry but they are not alone in this decision. They have their board meeting and after considering everyone's opinion, the final decision is getting released. No doubt within the industry, there are many organizations who are competing with each other to become best in the market. Competition has its own advantage in particular field. By feeling the competition in the market only, leaders will understand the gravity of their organization's position in the market.
Imagine a world without support of each other? It can lead to chaos among themselves. There are various part of world which are suffering from hideous conditions due to no cooperation among different political parties. For example, Syria, where two extreme groups are not willing to provide any kind of support to each other, and due to this they are not coming to truce. On the other hand, North Korea and South Korea are trying to make peace after so many decades. This peace will definitely help the poor nation to advance.
In general, it is completely extreme statement from the speaker. Cooperation should not be taken as granted but that does not mean competition is not the parameter one should be ignoring it. Cooperation among each other will help to handle the world's problem or industry level problems very effectively. On the other hand, competition will help to understand the nation's values or organization values among the world or industry level respectively.
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- Letter of recommendation 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ith democracy rather than dictatorship. Although, I would not completely ignore the comp...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...forests, unemployment, hunger etc. Now, this problems cant be solved by one nation o...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...loyment, hunger etc. Now, this problems cant be solved by one nation or one society....
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...y themselves. By cooperating with other nations leader, new and innovative solutions ca...
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Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...mong each other will help to handle the worlds problem or industry level problems very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in general, in particular, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30673316708 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8326147497 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513715710723 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.601746797 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7083333333 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110905615118 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333842989337 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309457330624 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064614731472 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255035592725 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.