The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps give a general view of routes access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. it is clear that there are many new public infrastructure and buildings constructed around the hospital to serve citizens. Overall, but, the city hospital remained unchanged.
In 2007, on the hospital road to the main lobby of the hospital, from north to south, there were six bus stops from two sides, with a parking lot on the right side next to the bus stops which was used for staff and public. Moreover, the city hospital was covered by the ring road.
In 2010, while the construction of the hospital was not changed, it opened a new car park to the west side of the ring road for public, and kept an old one only for staff. In addition, they replaced six bus stops by a bus station on the left side of the hospital road.To connect the hospital with the bus station, on the hospital road, they built one roundabout at the entrance to the ring road and one roundabout at the entry to the city road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. it is clear that there are many new public...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...n on the left side of the hospital road.To connect the hospital with the bus stati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46195652174 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33490177617 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.423236873 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22375238083 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121822986858 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658102503695 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16501208589 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032383725363 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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