Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist
knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to
print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these
decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it he better if
more good news was reported?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas knowledge and experience and support your arguments with
examples and relevant evidence.
it has often been said that “good news is bad news” because it does not sell
newspapers. A radio station that once decided to present only good news soon
found that it had gone out of business for lack of listeners. bad news on the other
hand is so common that in order to cope with it, we often simply ignore it. we have
become immune to bad news and the newspapers and radio stations are aware of
this.
While newspapers and tv stations may aim to report world events accurately, be
they natural or human disasters, political events or the horrors of war, it is also
true that their main objective is to sell newspapers and attract listeners and
viewers to their stations. For this reason tv and radio stations attempt to reflect
the flavour of their station by providing news broadcasts tailormade to suit their
listeners’ preferences. programmes specialising in pop music or tv soap operas
focus more on local news, home issues and uptodate traffic reports. The more
serious stations and newspapers like to provide “so called” objective news reports
with editorial comment aimed at analysing the situation.
If it is true, then, that newspapers and tv stations are tailoring their news to their
readers’ and viewers’ requirements, how can they possibly be reporting real
world events in an honest and objective light? Many radio and tv stations do, in
fact, report items of good news but they no longer call this news. they refer to
these as human interest stories and package them in programmes specialising,
for instance, in consumer affairs or local issues. good news now comes to us in
the form of documentaries the fight against children’s cancer or AIDS, or the
latest developments in the fight to save the planet from environmental pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it has often been said that 'good new...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bad
... out of business for lack of listeners. bad news on the other hand is so common th...
^^^
Line 12, column 30, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Programmes
...uit their listeners' preferences. programmes specialising in pop music or tv soap op...
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Line 18, column 48, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun radio seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many radios'.
Suggestion: Many radios
...vents in an honest and objective light? Many radio and tv stations do, in fact, report it...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...news but they no longer call this news. they refer to these as human interest stori...
^^^^
Line 21, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Good
...e, in consumer affairs or local issues. good news now comes to us in the form of do...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13666666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88265888066 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 106.607317073 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.634760184 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 3.83414634146 574% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491281034811 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232521416484 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020752737498 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0161344233503 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261869687906 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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