Many adults think the childhood and schooldays are best year s of a person s life What s the reason do you think Do you agree at disagree

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Many adults think the childhood and schooldays are best year's of a person's life. What's the reason do you think? Do you agree at disagree?

Many people believe that, childhood and early schooldays are the most wonderful periods of everyone's life. I agree with the notion that, it is a golden period of less stressful and less responsible life. In this essay shall delve into the reasons in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, it is no doubt true that, during the childhood time they do not have stress and tension because, even if they do mistakes the parents ignore them. Moreover, parents always there to love and look after. So kids do not feel worries. Many physical and psychological stress begins once they reached to the teenage period. Children most of the time interact with their friends and busy with outdoor activities. As such on the academic point of view, only limited subjects to study. A recent study found that, around 75 percent of adult and teenagers are leading the highest stress and strain as opposed to children.

In addition to that, once a child become adult there would have many responsibilities in their life. They have to work hard to meet the basic needs. In this case children are very fortunate as they free from this as well as need not be tensed about financial matters. The parents are spending money for their studies, food, shelter. Besides balancing family and work is a difficult task but, children might have keep up their study and play. However, children do not required to become a leader of the family.

In conclusion, I reiterate my statement that, childhood is always a stress free and obviously less duty to do in their life. Whereas teenagers and adult must go through all these hurdles and responsibilities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...life. In this essay shall delve into the reasons in the following paragraphs. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87410071942 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55095831678 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0795692838 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2777777778 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123601529866 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390999124247 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395594078734 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08296666995 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222979011467 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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