Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A transition among people in their career is a great idea to beat many issues which people are facing today's scenario. I agree with the notion that doing variety of jobs can be benefited many ways. A number of arguments surround my opinion.
To begin with, financial in security is concern of todays generation. To get suffient amount of money people literally change their job to another to enjoy the basic needs such as food , water, shelter. Another advantage is the great platform to learn different skills. Therefore, secure life is assured in the long run.
In addition, A carrer change is better for breaking the monotony. It is psychologically true that whenever a person work in the same environment throughout their life feel kind of excruciating boredom. As a result they cannot work actively because same job reduce their interest and enthusiasm to perform efficiently.
However, those who want to get promotion in their future changing job frequently is not a suitable decision. Adjustment is a big factor, even though the working atmosphere is burden for them, many employees continue in the same field. Although, this attitude may affect both physically and mentally.
In conclusion, those who have a wide range of carrer in their belt will have more job security. Instead of sticking to one job one should change their carrer at least once in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, at least, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04385964912 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69583376505 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6824677021 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318227978417 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833321611781 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546828708944 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149106651314 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477636867034 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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