you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.How important the licence is to youAsking how he/she found itSaying how you would love to thank him/her.

Essay topics:
you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.How important the licence is to youAsking how he/she found itSaying how you would love to thank him/her.

Dear Madam,

I am writing this letter to thank you for returning my drivers license. Since, I travel to work by car it would be very difficult to do so without my license. For the past two days when I didn't have my license I used public transport. However, it was not very convenient as I am not comfortable with taking the train. It makes me claustrophobic.

I would like to know where did you find it. As I was traveling around the city for work, I absolutely have no idea as to where I might have left the license. Only on returning home did I realize that my document was lost. This incident has made me more vigilant and I hope to be more careful in the future.

Finally, I cannot thank you enough for your kind gesture and would like to send you a gift as a token of my appreciation. Such kindness cannot go unnoticed. Could you please give me your address so I can send across a bouquet of flowers and a surprise package along.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind Regards,
Anne

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y license. For the past two days when I didnt have my license I used public transport...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable taking'.
Suggestion: comfortable taking
... it was not very convenient as I am not comfortable with taking the train. It makes me claustrophobic. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: BOUQUET_OF_FLOWERS[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'bouquet'.
Suggestion: bouquet
... me your address so I can send across a bouquet of flowers and a surprise package along. I look...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33862433862 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51626104864 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2892697157 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5714285714 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143207394848 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478371505741 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611394511891 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964038615408 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376009908324 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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