the graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
The given bar chart compares the rate of unemployment women in four countries of the UK between 2013 and 2014. The units are measured by percent.
Overall, the countries had a difference to each period, at the starting period, england presented the highest proportion, which was replaced by scotland in the end.
It is clearly seen from the information, in 2013, the lowest unemployment was in northern ireland and wales, 5,6% and 5,4% respectively, at the following that scotland illustrated at 6.1%.
With regard to the data, after one year, the scotland rate increased to 6.7%, while the remaining nations decreased england to 6,5%, wales 5% and northern ireland 4,6%, which outlined the bottom point compared with others.
Finally, the last year, the most significant difference for unemployment in northern ireland, ten percent reduced even before, as opposed to, increasing rate provided in scotland.
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- the graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32638888889 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79935198355 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5352202672 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185275331832 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977556503837 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718449439774 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103888401939 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893628932612 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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