People should follow customs and traditions when start to live in a new country. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that people who have resided in a foreign country should adapt to local customs and practices. I completely agree with this view.
Newcomers will face many problems in the social norms of the host country. Firstly, it's is extremely difficult to blend into a new country. This is because they often have different habits in daily life in each nation. For example, In Thailand, touching the head is considered as an unrespected action while it's an action that shows a love between parent and children in the family of some nation. Secondly, illegal false could be generated if foreigners do not know the special rules of this country. For instance, spitting gum on the street of Singapore is an action that violates the environmental protection law, violated person could be fined a lot of money.
There are also benefits for overseas people when they practise traditional habits of locals. One advantage is that local citizens are welcoming while they feel that foreigners are showing a respect for their way of life. The establishment of a closer link between the host country's residents and foreigners. Another benefit is avoiding social isolation, newcomers get more experiences in customs and traditions during national festivals and holidays that assist them easily to communicate and blend into new countries.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is essential for new citizens to follow the habits of locals in the host country in order to fully integrate with a new culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0562248996 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7226131523 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2100918115 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176759076855 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582909286387 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512063848392 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107471266294 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276295494524 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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