Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
In a free economy such as the United States’s, corporations play an influential role in shaping the societies and communities they operate it whether they want to admit it or not. Because so, I align more closely with the view that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the communities they operate in.
Corporations have a responsibility to serve the societies because society memebers play the utmost important role in generating revenue for corporations. To illustrate this point, I will use the rise of Google, a tech giant that has become a hot topic lately by the media, as my case study. Google started out as a search engine back in the early days of the dot com bubble. It has seen tremendous growth since then thanks to its popularity among Internet users. Thanks to its popularity as a search engine, Google was able to captilize on paid advertisements to make a profit and thus developed into the large company that it is today. This growth would have been impossible without Google’s user base. We know this by looking at Yahoo, another rival search engine of Google, that did not have a strong userbase and has been slowly declining in values over the years. Therefore, Google’s success can be almost solely attribute to the communities they operate in. This real life example proves that without the society’s support, corporations would not be able to thrive. Therefore, they should give back to the communities that has contribute to their success.
On the other hand, I realize that corporations also have other priorities on their mind, like keeping their stakeholders happy. In addition, money is an important resource for a company to grow or sustain its current level of operation. Thus, it is within the fundemental nature of corporations to maximize their profits and please their investors. However, coporations need to be able to keep their customers in order to have revenue. In order to do that, they need to display a good image of themselves around the communities, and the best way to accomplish this would be, unsuprisingly, to help and promote the wellness of their surround communities. Therefore, I do not see how maximizing profit would have affect on any corporation’s ability to ensure wellness in societies they operate in. As a matter of fact, these two viewpoints, while radically different in nature, do not conflict with each other. Any company have the ability to please both investors and its customers simutaneously, and ultimately, there is no reason why they have to pick one over the other.
For these reasons above, I believe that coporations should promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1148, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...d give back to the communities that has contribute to their success. On the other hand, ...
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Line 3, column 712, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ot see how maximizing profit would have affect on any corporation's ability to ensur...
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Line 3, column 927, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t conflict with each other. Any company have the ability to please both investors an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07555555556 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04056200133 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524444444444 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4049968166 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.761904762 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333350707129 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09086988198 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927031660685 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24056483547 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837911274257 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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