Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Every child should be raised in a home with two parents. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“they educate children and are the first teachers that people have seen” Tara Westover, Educated, 2018. How can parents change the lives? Although some people do not believe that every child should be raised in a home with two parents, others accede two parents’ role in children’ raising. In my opinion, two parents have a staple role in raising the children because it reduces the crime rates in society, increases children’s constructive communication skills, and prepares the children for the future conjugal lives. In the following, I am inclined to put forth some arguments to illustrate my schemes.
First and foremost, by and large, no prize for guessing that there is a reverse relationship between the crime rates and the education. Indeed, parents are one of the constructive teachers that everyone has. For instance, their manners, behavior, and actions whether halters the crime rates or promotes them. They can teach principal roles to their children. According to SCI, Statistic Center of Iran, around 83 percent of crime rates could be reduced by an appropriate education. Thus, it seems the parents’ roles in an appropriate education or decreation of crime rates are not deniable.
Another thing coming to the mind is that parents take center stage in augmenting their children’s communication abilities. The fact of the matter, they play the major role in improving children’s interactions with others. Based on the various studies, learning fundamental roles of communication skills which helps the children to establish their positions in the society. In other words, it aides them to make friends, reduce the stress levels by talking other ones, expanding their experiences, and consequentially find their positions in the society, especially relating to their jobs.
Last but not least, the status quo children are the future parents. The parents’ imprinting is so important. In fact, according to the official statistics of the USA, many divorces are occurred because of impair knowledge related to the people’s conjugal matters. Undoubtedly, parents have a critical role not only in forming but also in transferring the information to the next generation. Therefore, parents play role in reducing the societal problems, indirectly.
In the nutshell, nevertheless thinking that two parents should not raise their children in the home, many people refute the opinion. Parents, as a good teacher, have great roles in reducing societal problems such as divorce and crime rates, improving the children’s fundamental abilities, and bringing the future generation properly. In sum, the societies would have not steeped with the associated issues if two parents had committed to their roles
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, another thing, for instance, in fact, such as, by and large, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52830188679 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06839894566 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6197746432 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.913043478 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951932618992 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308027197404 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676857510631 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610761033652 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573853542495 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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