Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In today’s modern world, with the advent of new machines, the amount of energy invested by humans in performing various household works has been reduced to a large extent. This advancement has nearly replaced manual power required to achieve certain tasks in our day to day life. This essay will focus on both benefits and drawbacks of this change.
To begin with, engineers invented different kinds of machines that assists people to do different household activities. Firstly, the invention of these machines helps the most valuable thing, that is time from being wasted .Let us consider the most important inventions like washing machines and vaccum cleaners. Today, almost all every house is equipped with these electrical appliances.For instance , the process of washing clothes often involves many tedious tasks such as washing, drying and ironing and without this cloth washer this process usually takes one to two hours.Also, even dusting process is made easier with this machine saving time.Secondly , another major advantage is these machines often produce accurate and correct results when compared to erroneous outcomes produced by manual jobs. Finally , they also help us in not wasting our energy and strain too much for this everyday tasks.
However , though these machines made our lives easier and smoother there are few disadvantages of using them . One of the major drawback is these kind of inventions which doesn’t require manual effort makes people lazy. People are becoming more and more dependent on them even for simple jobs. In addition to this , these equipments are usually expensive and only few sections of societies can afford to buy them.
To sum up, I believe the benefits of these machines outweigh the disadvantages. As we all know necessity is the mother of invention, these machines are invented considering the basic needs of the people so that they can save their time and energy as well.
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- Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 78
- Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 310.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26129032258 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61215919518 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 106.607317073 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622580645161 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 283.868780488 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.872649979 43.030603864 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113210244168 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395209644592 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305006944207 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652668569123 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247176431 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 40.7170731707 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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