You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that i moved to my own house. As you visited my last house and saw how congested it was. we were just fed up of the society and the area and at the same time we are thinking of the family planning so before going ahead want everything to be in place.
The new house is quite good, windy and bright. I made some changes according to my taste and likes. it has three bedrooms, a kitchen, three restrooms, living room, dining room and five balconies with a beautiful view outside. This area has all the facilities like jogging track, gym, swimming pool, restaurant and a big clubhouse with all the basic necessities. It is quite calm here. I am sure you will like the place and design as well as i had really invested my time in it. Why don't you pay us a visit this weekend and see the place and will have some gossips as it's been so long since we met. I will prepare your favourite Chinese cuisine for lunch.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Nisha Bhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...riting this letter to let you know that i moved to my own house. As you visited m...
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Suggestion: We
...ast house and saw how congested it was. we were just fed up of the society and the...
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...g ahead want everything to be in place. The new house is quite good, windy and b...
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Suggestion: It
...hanges according to my taste and likes. it has three bedrooms, a kitchen, three re...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
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...t and a big clubhouse with all the basic necessities. It is quite calm here. I am sure you w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ll like the place and design as well as i had really invested my time in it. Why ...
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... had really invested my time in it. Why dont you pay us a visit this weekend and see...
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...ur favourite Chinese cuisine for lunch. I will be waiting for your reply. You...
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... I will be waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
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... reply. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42496331401 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8361662039 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178594177369 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591114443603 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057479374228 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10709410854 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326949548759 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.