Today the internet and TV have created chance for ordinary people to become famous. Is it a positive or negative development?
The wide reach of television an online communication, has opened doors for common people, to become famous by showcasing their skills at both national and international level. I completely opine, that with advent of these modern communication mediums, every individual received major boost in self expression.
To begin with, various television channels nowadays stream live talent shows. These shows cover wide aspects of natural skills pertaining to singing, cooking, action, dancing and many more options related to entertainment. One major factor in their popularity is that they draw participation from general public across nation. Also these shows have nationwide reach. Over last years many common people have reached stardom level after winning these shows. No doubt this also helps in benefiting them economically as well.
Similarly internet has also helped lives of general public by providing them international stage for showcasing their skills. One major example is online video streaming service providor YouTube. Over last decade, hundreds of people have benefited through it by showcasing their skills in IT, education, dancing, music and much more. These people have earned status of demi Gods in their respective fields and enjoy following of million of people.
Additional, they also helps in generating secondary indirect employment through anciliory services in professions across photography, editing, tourism and local hospitality providors. Finally they also get financial stability by earning advertisement revenue, which otherwise they would have never thought of.
To conclude, television and internet has opened flood gates for every person, having mastery in respective field, to express and present himself for global recognition and possibility of earning a celebrity status
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
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Suggestion: Also,
...tion from general public across nation. Also these shows have nationwide reach. Over...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reached'.
Suggestion: reached
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Suggestion: Similarly,
...enefiting them economically as well. Similarly internet has also helped lives of gener...
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...ion of people. Additional, they also helps in generating secondary indirect employ...
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Suggestion: Finally,
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...ossibility of earning a celebrity status
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, second, similarly, so, well, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84210526316 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77702265476 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669172932331 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2723339469 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128258902443 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407025737193 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04209074141 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074567608397 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381969132714 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.